Monday, January 24, 2011

microfiction Monday – I’ll Be Damned

Susan’s Picture:

 riverside

My Story:

 Grasshopper: I'm not sure about this.
Sensei: We must test to see if you have learned; if you've evolved.
Grasshopper: But walking on water?


Write a story in 140 characters
using the picture Susan provides as inspiration.


 
Hosted by Susan @ Stony River


 
Merry Meet and Blessed Be


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34 comments:

  1. jabblogMon Jan 24, 07:29:00 AM EST

    This made me laugh :-)

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  2. izzyMon Jan 24, 08:12:00 AM EST

    Yup the ice is very thin out there- Good one! Thanks.

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  3. gaelikaaMon Jan 24, 08:48:00 AM EST

    Well, Jesus did it!

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  4. Finding PamMon Jan 24, 09:07:00 AM EST

    What a picture? You captured the essence perfect.

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  5. UnknownMon Jan 24, 09:27:00 AM EST

    Love the way you think (and write!)

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  6. anthonynorthMon Jan 24, 09:44:00 AM EST

    Great fun :-)
    Enjoyed that.

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  7. Brian MillerMon Jan 24, 09:49:00 AM EST

    just run really fast...smiles.

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  8. PeggyMon Jan 24, 10:51:00 AM EST

    This was funny!
    I just wonder if he did it!
    Have a good week ahead my friend!

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  9. DeborahMon Jan 24, 10:52:00 AM EST

    VERY good one! hehe :o)

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  10. Sylvia KMon Jan 24, 10:56:00 AM EST

    Ah! expectations!! What a big smile to start my day, Nessa! I love it! Have a great day and enjoy your week!

    Sylvia

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  11. SuzMon Jan 24, 11:17:00 AM EST

    chuckle

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  12. Grandma's GoulashMon Jan 24, 12:24:00 PM EST

    The mist does look thick enough to walk on. Wonder if Grasshopper will give it a try.

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  13. Mama BadgerMon Jan 24, 12:48:00 PM EST

    Give it a shot. What's the worst that can happen? You get a little wet? Or eaten by a sea monster.

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  14. Maude LynnMon Jan 24, 01:44:00 PM EST

    That is hilarious!

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  15. EG CameraGirlMon Jan 24, 02:19:00 PM EST

    Very clever!

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  16. UnknownMon Jan 24, 02:28:00 PM EST

    Too funny :))

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  17. AnonymousMon Jan 24, 02:50:00 PM EST

    If that works maybe he will next learn how to feed hundreds with one loaf of bread! Great mm. I enjoyed reading it.
    Have a wonderful week. Cheers~

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  18. ClaudiaMon Jan 24, 03:11:00 PM EST

    maybe he could jump..?
    i like what you say with this short story - very good!

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  19. DianeMon Jan 24, 03:37:00 PM EST

    Maybe that Grasshopper can hop over instead of walk....? :O)

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  20. Jay NoelMon Jan 24, 04:26:00 PM EST

    Good stuff!

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  21. Elizabeth MuellerMon Jan 24, 04:48:00 PM EST

    How cute! I like this. :D

    ♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥

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  22. Other MaryMon Jan 24, 05:39:00 PM EST

    Ah - good fit and fun way to see the pic!

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  23. Susan at Stony RiverMon Jan 24, 06:02:00 PM EST

    Oh good one! (That walking on water thing is SO done, anyhow ... LOL)

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  24. RAMon Jan 24, 06:34:00 PM EST

    LOL. You always have so much fun with a given prompt. Have a great day :)

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  25. SouthLakesMomMon Jan 24, 06:47:00 PM EST

    This reminds me of how clouds always look so substantial until you're inside them.

    You made me think, Nessa. That's a good thing. ;-)

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  26. Arts web showMon Jan 24, 08:17:00 PM EST

    This is an excellent microfiction nessa.
    I like this a lot

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  27. JimMon Jan 24, 11:16:00 PM EST

    Very different, Nessa, but good! :)

    Got to watch those Sensei believers. Be careful, they soon will have us all drowning ourselves.
    ..

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  28. quillyTue Jan 25, 12:20:00 AM EST

    I hope he brought a towel and a change of clothes.

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  29. IndraniTue Jan 25, 12:28:00 AM EST

    Very funny.
    Well composed.

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  30. KBTue Jan 25, 01:07:00 AM EST

    Nice one!

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  31. tattytiaraTue Jan 25, 02:42:00 AM EST

    Perfect fit for the image!

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  32. ZuzanaTue Jan 25, 04:29:00 AM EST

    I liked this one, it fits the image perfectly.;))
    xoxo

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  33. Susan CookTue Jan 25, 07:12:00 AM EST

    Cool idea for that picture. Imaginative.

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  34. secret agent womanTue Jan 25, 07:36:00 PM EST

    Ha ha ha!

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