Friday, March 25, 2011

Flash 55 - The Monster

A ravaging beast full of sharp claws and pointed teeth ripped through my straining muscles to gnaw on my bones, sucking marrow between black swollen lips while injecting venom into my blood stream to works its way into my brain overwhelming me with aching pain, misery and sadness. I’ve had a rough week at work.


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21 comments:

  1. ~✽Mumsy✽~Fri Mar 25, 08:37:00 AM EDT

    Fantastically described, Nessa! I hope you'll have a better next week.

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  2. anthonynorthFri Mar 25, 10:56:00 AM EDT

    Now that is more than rough.
    Nice one.

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  3. Noe Noe Girl...A Queen of all Trades.Fri Mar 25, 11:27:00 AM EDT

    excellant! Here's to a better next week!
    <><

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  4. AnonymousFri Mar 25, 11:32:00 AM EDT

    Is that a description of your boss? Yikes.

    - Alice

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  5. JeanieFri Mar 25, 11:42:00 AM EDT

    I had a similar week at work....thanks for putting it into words for me.

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  6. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFri Mar 25, 12:53:00 PM EDT

    bless you next week..

    after this 55, you will be refreshed and ..

    Happy Weekend.

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  7. G-ManFri Mar 25, 01:42:00 PM EDT

    Vanessa Kilmer!!!!
    Take a deep breath.
    Pour a shot (NOT Southern Comfort)
    Close your eyes
    Serenity Now...
    Isn't that better?

    That'l be 25 Bucks please..(hehehe)

    Loved your Bad Week 55.
    But I'm Very Happy to see you!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  8. AnonymousFri Mar 25, 01:54:00 PM EDT

    Oh, that is *GRIM*. It sounds like you need a full day at a high-end spa, complete with massage, mani-pedi treatments and cranio-sacral therapy.

    And a three week vacation.

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  9. Steve IsaakFri Mar 25, 02:06:00 PM EDT

    I've had too many jobs like that. Those frakkers still haunt me.

    Good piece, my friend. Hope it improves, one way or another.

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  10. BelindaFri Mar 25, 06:03:00 PM EDT

    Whoa! Rough is an understatement. Loved this highly descriptive, ripped to shreds feeling 55.

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  11. secret agent womanFri Mar 25, 07:01:00 PM EDT

    You must have!

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  12. Claudya MartinezSat Mar 26, 01:27:00 AM EDT

    Shake it off!

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  13. ZuzanaSat Mar 26, 03:44:00 AM EDT

    Oh my goodness, what a true beast. Sorry to hear that you had a rough week, hope the weekend will make up for it.;)
    xoxo

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  14. ~sWaMpY~Sat Mar 26, 03:07:00 PM EDT

    Sounds as though you and my youngest daughter had similar experiences at work this week. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and that March 28-April 1 is much better.

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  15. Brian MillerSat Mar 26, 05:16:00 PM EDT

    ugh. good thing the weekend is here..hope yours is a great one...

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  16. quillySun Mar 27, 12:43:00 AM EDT

    I thought this was an excellent description of the virus that took me down!

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  17. JennTue Mar 29, 12:53:00 AM EDT

    I hate snakes too. Hate `em!

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  18. JimWed Mar 30, 12:48:00 AM EDT

    I loved it, Nessa! (this is the first blog post I have ever 'rated'--gave it a fiver)
    Sorry it is at 'your' expense. But then I think you are like me, not everything you write is about you.
    Remember, your poet lives his own life! Mine does.
    ..
    Now, the first thing I thought of was of those in-dwelling beetles that Dan Simmons wrote of in his book, Drood. I am really glad that I 'read' that book. Too bad it had to end. Or at least like it did end.
    ..

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  19. KBThu Mar 31, 02:13:00 AM EDT

    Yikes! Hope you are feeling better now.

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  20. MollyThu Mar 31, 11:52:00 AM EDT

    Hello Nessa,
    I am sorry that the week has not been good. I am glad to see that you are actively keeping up with your blog. Take care.

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  21. HobbesSun Apr 10, 06:52:00 AM EDT

    Must have been!

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