and I find myself breaking out in hives
do I remember how to do it
is it like riding a bike
I have to make my thoughts fit
like a finger in a dike
and say something that doesn’t stink like chives
hoping everyone survives
do I remember how to do it
is it like riding a bike
I have to make my thoughts fit
like a finger in a dike
and say something that doesn’t stink like chives
hoping everyone survives
Write a story in exactly 55 words.
Merry Meet and Blessed Be
Well, you succeeded ;-)
ReplyDeleteand you rhyme pretty well...smiles. good to see you more and more nessa!
ReplyDeleteand looky there! we did survive and enjoyed every morsel!
ReplyDeleteVanessa Kilmer
ReplyDeleteThe long Lost sister returns
Please don't leave again!!
'Missed You' Haiku
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Good job...here's a high five for you hives and chives.
ReplyDeleteyou did super well...
ReplyDeletehonest and lovely words.
Happy Weekend.
You wrangled and roped fifty-five words and corralled them perfectly!
ReplyDelete(falls over dead)
ReplyDeleteJust kidding! (LOL!) Nice 55!
Great 55. As usual.
ReplyDeleteyay!! She jumps back in and lands a 55!!
ReplyDeleteWe've missed you so much.
And funny -- I can no longer write anything other than 55 words. :)
xoxo
Well well well.. you certainly have succeeded, Ness!! :) And we have survived too... ;-) So, don't you worry!! :))
ReplyDeleteLotsa love!!
Sometimes my thoughts fit like a finger in a dike. Do that for very long and you will lose a finger.
ReplyDeleteThen it will stink worse than chives.
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Oh yes, good 55.
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I didn't count the words, but it seems to me you remembered how to do it. Good job.
ReplyDeleteYou did well. I haven't done one for ages either.
ReplyDeleteNice it was well written..the last lone made me smile..lol.Nice 55 again!
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