Awesome picture. I'll have to come back to the poem when I have more functioning brain cells. lol
Nicely done, Nessa.
ha. i like that metaphor for the future...flopping around looking for a toe hold...
that last line is a killer.... so very ominous, gosh I have felt like this many times Nessa great writing for the prompt!
Beautifully original - the fish metaphor made me smile, but it's true, future does often seem to flop around just so.
like a fish gillgulping for airgraspingfor a footholdinto beingi love this nessa - can see it...you made something so abstract as future visible with your words
Great last line!
Very nice, Nessa.
I am that fish.
I love that flopping future - because it so often feels just like that!I loved this, Nessa!
Good one, Nessa! And no, we can never guarantee the future will be good. But we can plan on it. The future will come no matter what it will be...
Place is, or can be, dynamic. This is wonderful.